For this activty we had to describe this picture and write a stroy here is
what i think about this photo this is an awesome photo with an awesome
view of the city
HOPE YOU LIKE IT
EMACYN
You have written a brief description of what you can see in your selected picture, I agree that she is wanting to take an amazing picture. It's a very risky one though!
A friendly reminder; remember that the task is asking you to write a short story about what is happening in the picture. You have made a good start, however you need to make sure it is between 8-10 sentences long. Please edit your post to make sure your story is the right length. I will be happy to award you full points for this activity once you have done this. :)
Personally, I probably wouldn't take a selfie the way she did because I wouldn't want to end up falling over the edge! No thank you! I shall stick to regular selfies.
Would you take a risky selfie like the girl in the picture?
Kia Ora Emacyn,
ReplyDeleteYou have written a brief description of what you can see in your selected picture, I agree that she is wanting to take an amazing picture. It's a very risky one though!
A friendly reminder; remember that the task is asking you to write a short story about what is happening in the picture. You have made a good start, however you need to make sure it is between 8-10 sentences long. Please edit your post to make sure your story is the right length. I will be happy to award you full points for this activity once you have done this. :)
Personally, I probably wouldn't take a selfie the way she did because I wouldn't want to end up falling over the edge! No thank you! I shall stick to regular selfies.
Would you take a risky selfie like the girl in the picture?
Toe feiloa'i fo'i,
Cia.